One night there was a crocodile it was very lonely but all of a sudden he found a camp and found a pepper pizza in the camp and ate it all. Next he went to his soft bed for a sleep because he ate so much pizza! Next morning he felt like an orange so he stole a orange and had it for breakfast and was sick. He found a orange tree and an orange fell in his face and it hurt him.Then he forgot everything. He went to look for his friends but couldn't remember who they were!
Crocodile
Soft
Orange
Pepper
Forgot
Matau writing class enjoyed reading your story. You have spread out the words you needed to include very well throughout your sentences. We think it is creative and funny. Hope the crocodile gets his memory back and remembers his friends. Try to use different sentence starters next time as there were two sentences starting with 'next'.
ReplyDeletePoor old croc! Well done boys. I really like the sentence starters you have used...one night, next, then..... Da Iawn
ReplyDeleteMiss oneil