Wednesday, April 30, 2014

Ryan 100WC

That was a bad dream! I was getting my clothes on I opened my cupboard door and there was a new world. A dream world with a forest, a village, dogs and more. The door disappeared  the floor broke I was falling 5000 feet down. I court  a huge birds wing and I pulled my self on it I flew to a village. Suddenly I was in a village I saw the door,i jumped of the bird I ran fort. I made it.    
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  1. UnknownMay 4, 2014 at 5:26 AM

    Hi Ryan,

    Thank-you for your entry this week, what a bad dream indeed! You have used lots of great ideas this week, to help you create suspense in your writing.

    Just remember to always re-read your work before posting to fix grammar, spelling and punctuation mistakes e.g. missing commas

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